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Warning: this Deviation is rated R (Retarded)! Don't look if you're under 18... there are other more appropriate Deviations for you in my gallery.

These are two pages in Croatian (pages no.4 and 5 to be precise) from the epic 50+ page comic which at the moment remains unfinished (about one third of it was done, and the rest is currently just in pencil-sketch form). The comic was started three years ago, and later abandoned (just temporarily?) for the variety of reasons. It's a raunchy, dirty and also very funny story that was greeted with lot of enthusiasm by people who saw all the material finished so far.

Without telling too much in advance, the whole story takes place during one night and shows the misadventures of Branko Stoka (or Brandon Stokes in English, pity that you lose a joke in translation). The character and situations are based on a real person! Used without permission, but he probably won't object too much... :D It's somebody I knew during the 90s, and this is not the first time that he appears as a hero in my comics.

Maybe I'll put the English versions later, though it's not too hard to get the basic idea even without knowing the language. The whole comic was supposed to be told mostly in pantomime, without lot of dialogue, just symbols and semi-coherent mumblings. The only exception being the silly little rapper who appears at the most unexpected places, as some kind of Greek Chorus.

Check my next Deviation [link] for more material from this unfinished project. Also, take a look at my latest Journal entry for some musings about the abandoned and unfinished works in general.

P.S. George Clooney (C) George Clooney. Used without permission :)
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Tatla2010 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
I like their face expressions
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HammersonHoek Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Thanks :)
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Granitoons Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Yup, I can't understand the language but it matters not! I get just what's happening you naughty boy! :)
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HammersonHoek Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Pardon me, this should be the correct link:

[link]
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HammersonHoek Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Thanks, I'm glad that you understood it. I'm always little bit worried when I upload the stuff that's not translated to English.

And here's a brief lesson in Croatian language - the text in panels 2 and 3:
"Ne" means "No"
"Zasto ne" means "Why Not" (or just "OK")
"Nakon dva sata" means "Two Hours Later"

Check out the part 2 of this deviation: [link] it's also naughty :D
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:icongranitoons:
Granitoons Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Thankies - shall do! Your Engilsh is obviously miles better than my Croatian! I can understand a bit of French but that's it.
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